Writers workshop #2 yah

Murder at the Park

 Aidain and his friends were going to the park. When they we’re walking, the lights went out. “Aidain was looking for Chloe, Colby, and Jenna.” Aidain found Chloe and Jenna, but not Colby. Aidain was calling him, but there was no answer.

They went out to find Colby. Jenna called Aidain and Chloe over and said she found Colby, but he was dead. Aidain was scared that he would get caught for what he had done. Aidain went to where Jenna was and asked, “what happened here” Aidain told Chloe that Colby was dead for real. Jenna said a man came by and asked what they were doing, and Colby said that we are going for a walk to find our friend, but then the man came back laughing. When Jenna was standing there. Aidain was so sad that he called the detective “Aiden.” He came as fast as he can he said, “what happen here?” Jenna said that they went for a walk to find Aidain and Chloe, Jenna said that a man came by when they were going for their walk. The detective Aiden said that, was the man dressed in black? The detective saw that there were stab marks on the shirt, so he looked under the bench and saw that there were bloody footprints. Aiden, the detective, saw that Aidain was so scared that he went to sit down on the bench and cry. So, the detective went to question him. Aidain said that he did not do it but. Then Aiden saw that he was laughing after when the detective went to question Jenna. Aiden seen that Aidain was about to cry and Aidain’s mom Michelle came and asked what happened Aidain said that Jenna and Colby were going for a walk, but someone stabbed Colby in the chest. Aiden the detective seen that Aidain was laughing at Jenna, and Jenna was crying Colby. Aiden the detective was trying to wake up Jenna she woke up and the detective said for Jenna to go home and sleep.

Who do you think did it?

  • Michelle
  • Jenna
  • Chloe
  • Aidain

 

 

Answer

Aidain was sitting there, and his hands were red and bloody, and his boots were bloody too Aidain was the killer and Colby’s Mom & Dad sued Aidain for killing their son so now Aidain is send to death. Aidain was so upset that he tried to get out and do another murder in a school.

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