Month: December 2021

Murder at the Park

 Aidain and his friends were going to the park. When they we’re walking, the lights went out. “Aidain was looking for Chloe, Colby, and Jenna.” Aidain found Chloe and Jenna, but not Colby. Aidain was calling him, but there was no answer.

They went out to find Colby. Jenna called Aidain and Chloe over and said she found Colby, but he was dead. Aidain was scared that he would get caught for what he had done. Aidain went to where Jenna was and asked, “what happened here” Aidain told Chloe that Colby was dead for real. Jenna said a man came by and asked what they were doing, and Colby said that we are going for a walk to find our friend, but then the man came back laughing. When Jenna was standing there. Aidain was so sad that he called the detective “Aiden.” He came as fast as he can he said, “what happen here?” Jenna said that they went for a walk to find Aidain and Chloe, Jenna said that a man came by when they were going for their walk. The detective Aiden said that, was the man dressed in black? The detective saw that there were stab marks on the shirt, so he looked under the bench and saw that there were bloody footprints. Aiden, the detective, saw that Aidain was so scared that he went to sit down on the bench and cry. So, the detective went to question him. Aidain said that he did not do it but. Then Aiden saw that he was laughing after when the detective went to question Jenna. Aiden seen that Aidain was about to cry and Aidain’s mom Michelle came and asked what happened Aidain said that Jenna and Colby were going for a walk, but someone stabbed Colby in the chest. Aiden the detective seen that Aidain was laughing at Jenna, and Jenna was crying Colby. Aiden the detective was trying to wake up Jenna she woke up and the detective said for Jenna to go home and sleep.

Who do you think did it?

• Michelle
• Jenna
• Chloe
• Aidain

 

 

Answer

Aidain was sitting there, and his hands were red and bloody, and his boots were bloody too Aidain was the killer and Colby’s Mom & Dad sued Aidain for killing their son so now Aidain is send to death. Aidain was so upset that he tried to get out and do another murder in a school.

Hello today I am going to be talking about a book that I am reading in my school. The book is so good it is about the Nazi because the book was all about the wars and Germans. The Nazi in this book is a little bit closer to the 20 page – 40 page.

 

Here is some information from the back of the book ” It’s October 1942 in Oslo, Norway. Fifteen-year-old Ilse Stern waiting in the park to meet boy-next-door Herman Rod for their first date. She was beginning to think he’d never ask her; she’s had a crush on him for a long time.

 

This book will blow your mind off when you read it I started to like it because it was getting vary good when Herman lingers for some time out side Ilse’s when he arrives home that evening. She was so happy to see him at her door but then she was not on time to talk to him so he went home that evening. 

Hope you liked my blog here is the pic of the book 

here is a link for more information for this book

http://librisnotes.blogspot.com/2017/06/almost-autumn-by-marianne-kaurin.html

Have A Good afternoon 😁😉😊🙂🤩😏🤗😛😜😝

ALONG WAY HOME

There was a girl named Lanassa, she was walking home from her girlfriend’s house, Lanassa was getting followed. She fell, she blacked out. Khloe was worried about Lanassa. Khloe called the cops and Lanassa asked for her phone, the man in black said no you can not have your phone because you will call for help. Khloe told the cops that her girlfriend got kidnaped by a man in black and through her is a padelvan and down the streets and Khloe lost the padelvan when it turned towards the forest.

Lanassa was scared when the padelvan rock, she hit her head on the wheel cover. Khloe was scared that she would die Lanassa lost her phone when she was halfway gone but when the man in black came, he found Lanassa phone. They got to his house where the man put Lanassa in his basement, she asked for her phone. She was trying to call somebody to get help, Lanassa was screaming like crazy, the cop was walking by the window were Lanassa was. Lanassa was screaming saying that she was down in the basement and the cop asked the man in black who’s in your basement. The man said, “it’s my sister she lives in my basement, and she likes to scream because she is playing video games over and over”. Lanassa was about to break the window so then she can get out of the basement and run up to the cop car. The man in black said that “Lanassa wasn’t at his house because he doesn’t even know her”. Khloe said that “she was going to find her girlfriend alone without the cops”. Lanassa’s brother and sister were pretty sad about their sister going missing, because there mom and dad passed away,  that is there older sister, they only have. Lanassa said that “she was going to stop herself if she really felt like it because she was thinking about Khloe”. Khloe seen that Lanassa had left a trail of glowing rocks, when the sun shins on them they will make a trail. Khloe seen that the man in black had Lanassa in his arms and he said, “off with your head”. Lanassa’s body drooped to the ground. Khloe told Lanassa’s brother & sister that Lanassa was dead.

THE END

They were so sad to hear what happened to Lanassa when Khloe said about the man in black.

The man in black was arrested after what happened, He has 3 years in jail.

Khloe really misses Lanassa so much that

You will find out in the next Writers workshop.

Have a good day!!! 😊