Writers workshop #2 yah

Murder at the Park

 Aidain and his friends were going to the park. When they we’re walking, the lights went out. “Aidain was looking for Chloe, Colby, and Jenna.” Aidain found Chloe and Jenna, but not Colby. Aidain was calling him, but there was no answer.

They went out to find Colby. Jenna called Aidain and Chloe over and said she found Colby, but he was dead. Aidain was scared that he would get caught for what he had done. Aidain went to where Jenna was and asked, “what happened here” Aidain told Chloe that Colby was dead for real. Jenna said a man came by and asked what they were doing, and Colby said that we are going for a walk to find our friend, but then the man came back laughing. When Jenna was standing there. Aidain was so sad that he called the detective “Aiden.” He came as fast as he can he said, “what happen here?” Jenna said that they went for a walk to find Aidain and Chloe, Jenna said that a man came by when they were going for their walk. The detective Aiden said that, was the man dressed in black? The detective saw that there were stab marks on the shirt, so he looked under the bench and saw that there were bloody footprints. Aiden, the detective, saw that Aidain was so scared that he went to sit down on the bench and cry. So, the detective went to question him. Aidain said that he did not do it but. Then Aiden saw that he was laughing after when the detective went to question Jenna. Aiden seen that Aidain was about to cry and Aidain’s mom Michelle came and asked what happened Aidain said that Jenna and Colby were going for a walk, but someone stabbed Colby in the chest. Aiden the detective seen that Aidain was laughing at Jenna, and Jenna was crying Colby. Aiden the detective was trying to wake up Jenna she woke up and the detective said for Jenna to go home and sleep.

Who do you think did it?

  • Michelle
  • Jenna
  • Chloe
  • Aidain

 

 

Answer

Aidain was sitting there, and his hands were red and bloody, and his boots were bloody too Aidain was the killer and Colby’s Mom & Dad sued Aidain for killing their son so now Aidain is send to death. Aidain was so upset that he tried to get out and do another murder in a school.

Almost Autumn By: Marianne Kaurin.

Hello today I am going to be talking about a book that I am reading in my school. The book is so good it is about the Nazi because the book was all about the wars and Germans. The Nazi in this book is a little bit closer to the 20 page – 40 page.

 

Here is some information from the back of the book ” It’s October 1942 in Oslo, Norway. Fifteen-year-old Ilse Stern waiting in the park to meet boy-next-door Herman Rod for their first date. She was beginning to think he’d never ask her; she’s had a crush on him for a long time.

 

This book will blow your mind off when you read it I started to like it because it was getting vary good when Herman lingers for some time out side Ilse’s when he arrives home that evening. She was so happy to see him at her door but then she was not on time to talk to him so he went home that evening. 

Hope you liked my blog here is the pic of the book 

Almost Autumn by Marianne Kaurin

here is a link for more information for this book

http://librisnotes.blogspot.com/2017/06/almost-autumn-by-marianne-kaurin.html

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Writers workshop.

ALONG WAY HOME

There was a girl named Lanassa, she was walking home from her girlfriend’s house, Lanassa was getting followed. She fell, she blacked out. Khloe was worried about Lanassa. Khloe called the cops and Lanassa asked for her phone, the man in black said no you can not have your phone because you will call for help. Khloe told the cops that her girlfriend got kidnaped by a man in black and through her is a padelvan and down the streets and Khloe lost the padelvan when it turned towards the forest.

Lanassa was scared when the padelvan rock, she hit her head on the wheel cover. Khloe was scared that she would die Lanassa lost her phone when she was halfway gone but when the man in black came, he found Lanassa phone. They got to his house where the man put Lanassa in his basement, she asked for her phone. She was trying to call somebody to get help, Lanassa was screaming like crazy, the cop was walking by the window were Lanassa was. Lanassa was screaming saying that she was down in the basement and the cop asked the man in black who’s in your basement. The man said, “it’s my sister she lives in my basement, and she likes to scream because she is playing video games over and over”. Lanassa was about to break the window so then she can get out of the basement and run up to the cop car. The man in black said that “Lanassa wasn’t at his house because he doesn’t even know her”. Khloe said that “she was going to find her girlfriend alone without the cops”. Lanassa’s brother and sister were pretty sad about their sister going missing, because there mom and dad passed away,  that is there older sister, they only have. Lanassa said that “she was going to stop herself if she really felt like it because she was thinking about Khloe”. Khloe seen that Lanassa had left a trail of glowing rocks, when the sun shins on them they will make a trail. Khloe seen that the man in black had Lanassa in his arms and he said, “off with your head”. Lanassa’s body drooped to the ground. Khloe told Lanassa’s brother & sister that Lanassa was dead.

THE END

They were so sad to hear what happened to Lanassa when Khloe said about the man in black.

The man in black was arrested after what happened, He has 3 years in jail.

Khloe really misses Lanassa so much that

You will find out in the next Writers workshop.

Have a good day!!! 😊

 

 

If the world was ending By: JP Saxe

Hello today I am going to tell you about the song If the world was ending By: JP Saxe, He has a good voice and he sings like an angel. He is best known for his collaboration with American singer and his now girlfriend Julia Michaels titled “If the World Was Ending” which was released on October 17, 2019. The song was nominated for a 2021 Grammy. 

JP Saxe and Julia Michaels, Eddie Rowley. Canadian singer-songwriter JP Saxe reveals that he’s still all loved up with girlfriend and fellow artist Julia Michaels after spending the last two years together in lockdown, he loves her so much.

JP Saxe is one of the best singers on my playlist and you mite like his song too. I love when I watch some of the songs that he made they are so good that my mom likes it a lot, I want to get my dad in to it next were he can focus on his work at home. 

Here is the lyrics that don’t have bad language:

If the World Was Ending

Julia MichaelsJP Saxe

I was distracted
And in traffic
I didn’t feel it
When the earthquake happened
But it really got me thinkin’
Were you out drinkin’?
Were you in the living room
Chillin’ watchin’ television?
It’s been a year now
Think I’ve figured out how
How to let you go and let communication die out

I know, you know, we know
You weren’t down for forever and it’s fine
I know, you know, we know
We weren’t meant for each other and it’s fine

But if the world was ending
You’d come over, right?
You’d come over and you’d stay the night
Would you love me for the hell of it?
All our fears would be irrelevant
If the world was ending
You’d come over, right?
The sky’d be falling and I’d hold you tight
And there wouldn’t be a reason why
We would even have to say goodbye
If the world was ending
You’d come over, right?
Right?
If the world was ending
You’d come over, right?
Right?

I tried to imagine
Your reaction
It didn’t scare me when the earthquake happened
But it really got me thinkin’
That night we went drinkin’
Stumbled in the house
And didn’t make it past the kitchen
Ah, it’s been a year now
Think I’ve figured out how
How to think about you without it rippin’ my heart out

I know, you know, we know
You weren’t down for forever and it’s fine
I know, you know, we know
We weren’t meant for each other and it’s fine

But if the world was ending
You’d come over, right?
You’d come over and you’d stay the night
Would you love me for the hell of it?
All our fears would be irrelevant
If the world was ending
You’d come over, right?
The sky’d be falling while I’d hold you tight
No, there wouldn’t be a reason why
We would even have to say goodbye
If the world was ending
You’d come over, right?
You’d come over, right?
You’d come over, you’d come over, you’d come over, right?

I know, you know, we know
You weren’t down for forever and it’s fine
I know, you know, we know
We weren’t meant for each other and it’s fine

But if the world was ending
You’d come over, right?
You’d come over and you’d stay the night
Would you love me for the hell of it?
All our fears would be irrelevant
If the world was ending
You’d come over, right?
The sky’d be falling while I hold you tight
No, there wouldn’t be a reason why
We would even have to say goodbye
If the world was ending
You’d come over, right?
You’d come over, you’d come over, you’d come over, right?

If the world was ending
You’d come over, right?

Drunk Me By: Mitchell Tenpenny

Hello today I am going to talk about Drunk Me By: Mitchell Tenpenny, he is a really good country singer because he loves to sing country. Mitchell Tenpenny is in love with a lady named Meghan Patrick. (She is so famous) Michell said that he is a lucky man for dating her.

 

Mitchell was born on  August 17, 1989 he was born in Nashville, Tennessee, United States, he started singing When he was 13 years old, he was the drummer and screamer in a hard rock band with his friends. He wrote his first song around then, too, and while he describes the lyrics as ‘terrible,’ it made his mother cry happy tears. The song was country, had a catchy melody and she could understand the words.

 

He really loves to sing because his song Drunk Me is the 3th on his play list, and he is loving all his song because they are really relaxing when you listen to them. Michell loves his girlfriend so much that he was about to ask her to marry her, and he was happy to ask her but he said that  “I am scared to ask her” to his Parents and they said that “he didn’t have to say it yet”. Here is the lyrics 

Some people don’t know when to quit and that’s why they quit
Some need to hit the bottom to see they got a problem, they can’t handle it
But that ain’t why I started cleaning up my life
Wish it was but, ooh, that would be a lie
I’ve been sober ’cause there ain’t no hangover like you girl, no, no, no
Baby can you come over
I always find those words at the bottom of a hundred proof, yeah
Girl, every time you do
I just end up, head all messed up like the sheets where we made love
I’ve been sober since you broke my heart in two
‘Cause drunk me can’t get over you (there ain’t no hangover like you)
Can’t get over, can’t get over (there ain’t no hangover like you)
Oh, no, no, no
All those bottles sitting up on the shelf are just salt on the wound
One sip and I’m picking up the phone trying not to go home without you
And that ain’t nothing but a whole lotta pain
And that kind of hurt, ooh hurts, it ain’t worth another drink
I’ve been sober ’cause there ain’t no hangover like you, no, no, no
Baby, can you come over
I always find those words at the bottom of a hundred proof, yeah
Girl, every time you do I just end up
Head all messed up like the sheets where we made love
I’ve been sober since you broke my heart in two
‘Cause drunk me can’t get over you, no
Can’t get over you, oh, no, no, no
I’ve been sober ’cause there ain’t no hangover like you, no, no, no
Can you come over
I always find those words at the bottom of a hundred proof, yeah
Girl, every time you do I just end up
Head all messed up like the sheets where we made love
I’ve been sober since you broke my heart in two
‘Cause drunk me, yeah drunk me, yeah drunk me
Can’t get over you, no (there ain’t no hangover like you)
Can’t get over, can’t get over
(There ain’t no hangover like you), oh, no, no, no
Hope you liked my blog here is some more information about the song have a good afternoon.

I Don’t Know About You By: Chris Lane

hello today I am going to talk about  I don’t know about you by Chris lane. I  Don’t Know About you is one of the best country song that I listen to, and Chris Lane made this song about his wife. Chris Lane was born on (November 9, 1984) and he is 36 years and his wife is Lauren Bushnell.

 

Lauren Bushnell is 31 years old and they have a son named Dutton Walker Lane he is 4 months old he was born this year on June 8th 2021. ( sorry for getting cared away where were we) I don’t Know about you is the sec  of the top list in Chris Lane’s play list there will be a pic to show that it is.

 

Chris Lane was sad when he wrote the song and his wife was about to cry. I don’t know about you is like one of the best things that the country hits, Chris was happy to do his song on stage. He was one of the best singers that I ever heard. Lauren Bushell was happy for her husband, He said be for he went on stage that he loved her so much here is the lyrics and the pic.

I don’t know about you
But I never come into this bar
On a Thursday before 10 o’clock
But I thought what the hell, why not?
I don’t know about you
But I never walk up and talk to
A stranger but when I saw you
I had to, I just had to
Girl, I know your favourite beer
‘Cause you told me and I bought it
You can leave me sitting right here
But if you feel like talking
What’s your name, what’s your sign, what’s your birthday?
What’s your wrist tattoo bible verse say?
Tell me this, do you kiss on the first date?
Don’t hold anything back (don’t hold anything back)
What’s your dream job?
Girl, where’s your hometown?
Yeah, what makes your world spin round and around?
And are you down to get out of here too?
Tell me everything till there’s nothing I don’t know about you
I don’t know about you
We can dip, we can slip out the back
Flee the scene, put your feet on my dash
Find a spot past the railroad tracks and never look back
But before that
What’s your name, what’s your sign, what’s your birthday?
What’s your wrist tattoo bible verse say?
Tell me this, do you kiss on the first date?
Don’t hold anything back (don’t hold anything back)
What’s your dream job?
Girl, where’s your hometown?
Yeah, what makes your world spin around and around?
And are you down to get out of here too?
Tell me everything till there’s nothing I don’t know about you
I know you like Bud Light
I know you got blue eyes
I know you got my heart beating in this bar
Tonight we can jump in, fall into something
And the perfect place to start is
What’s your name, what’s your sign, what’s your birthday?
What’s your wrist tattoo bible verse say?
Tell me this, do you kiss on the first date?
Don’t hold anything back (don’t hold anything back)
What’s your dream job?
Girl, where’s your hometown?
Yeah, what makes your world spin around and around?
And are you down to get out of here too?
Tell me everything till there’s nothing I don’t know about you
Tell me everything, tell me everything
Tell me everything till there’s nothing I don’t know about you
Tell me everything, tell me everything
Tell me everything till there’s nothing I don’t know about you
here is the pic 
Have a good afternoon good bey  😊😊😊😁😁😎😎😎😎😎😎🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰🥰

One Man Band By: Old Dominion

Hello today I am going to talk about One Man Band by: Old Dominion. Old Dominion they  are  really good country singers. One Man Band  is very good when you listen to it, it helps with a lot of things like school work that is hard, hand writing, and drawing. I love this song because it helps me a lot you mite like it a lot too.

 

One Man Band is about Old Dominion singing about them drinking and playing music with there  band mates. Old Dominion likes there  song so much that  they  writing more and more every day (sorry for getting off topic where were we).  One  Man Band is so nice and it came out on (September 16, 2020) it is so nice to shear this song with other people because of how good it is.

 

Old Dominion they like this song because on there play list is top1 here is a pic to show it is, but Old Dominion want there wife’s to here this song because they drink to much ( the boys😂). I love to listen to it because it makes me laugh so much and you mite laugh too. here is the pic of it in the top1

 

 

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GO and see my friend Eternity’s blog at this link

https://elliesaemsblog2020.edublogs.org/

here are the the lyrics

Mercy By Brett young

Hello today I am going to talk about Mercy By Brett Young, Brett Young is a country singer he has the beautiful voice that you will ever here in the world. Brett has 2 beautiful girls his girls mean a lot to him he wrote this song for his wife because she was saying Mercy so Brett young wrote it and sang it.

Brett young loves his song that he wrote  another called Mercy what I am talking about right now okay now where were we here we go. I love Brett young’s song, sorry for getting carried away.

Brett young’s songs are so nice to listen to when you are sad or when you are at home alone because it is good. Go and listen to the song right now because you will like it . here is the lyrics

Mercy

Mercy
Why you gotta show up lookin’ so good just to hurt me?
Why you wanna stop this whole damn world from turning?
Mercy
Why you hanging on so tight if this ain’t working?
Why you wanna stop this flame if it’s still burning?
‘Cause it’s still burning
So if you’re gonna break my heart, just break it
And if you’re gonna take your shot, then take it
Take it
If you made up your mind, then make it
Make this fast
If you ever loved me
Have mercy
If you go out tonight and get drunk and lonely
Wind up home alone, please don’t call me
And say you miss me… no
So if you’re gonna break my heart, just break it
And if you’re gonna take your shot, then take it
Take it
If you made up your mind, then make it
Make this fast
If you ever loved me
Have mercy
Woah
Oh have mercy
If you’re gonna break my heart, just break it
If you’re gonna take your shot, take it
Take it
Oh if you’re gonna break my heart, just break it
And if you’re gonna take your shot, then take it
Take it
If you made up your mind, then make it
Make this fast
If you ever loved me
Mmmh if you ever loved me
Have mercy
Oh have mercy
Oh have mercy
Have mercy.
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